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Post by nolifesg on Feb 25, 2008 13:16:49 GMT 8
Invited to shoot for another friend, Terence and Sharon, as a 2nd photographer. A montage is made for them as an appreciation for inviting me to shoot in their wedding. Enjoy... ;D Click on the image to access my multiply for the montage.
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Post by lowlights on Feb 25, 2008 19:24:05 GMT 8
Wa you are really good with this montage thing..clap clap
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manda
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Post by manda on Feb 25, 2008 20:39:01 GMT 8
excellent
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Post by nolifesg on Feb 25, 2008 20:53:09 GMT 8
Thanks Richard and Manda.
I just feel that something is missing. But do not know what. haha
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luvin
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Post by luvin on Apr 1, 2008 23:08:05 GMT 8
Hi nolifesg,
Nice montage. Love the mood you set.
Not sure if this is the missing element. But just my thoughts to help you along...
1. Try to keep the flow of the montage going... for example, your night shoots were great, of the cake, the march in and the dinner table shots. But all of a sudden you had a photo of the groom standing infront of the mirror touching up his tie. Kinda threw me off. If you like to place the image, give a go at having the groom's image next to the picture of the bride having her night make up done. Might help with the flow.
2. Personally, you had one too many "artistic" photos. You started off with the double happiness and the candels... Nice touch... you followed up with one or 2 images of the groom's flower and the groom and brudders then followed by the car shot. In 5 images, you had 3 1/2 "artistic" photos... "Where's the bride??" Normally, we would use these kind of artistic photos to change the theme of the flow. E.g. start off with the double happiness photo and / or the 2 candle shot, followed up by 2 or 3 images of the bride getting ready, then the car handle image followed by the groom's flower shot and the brudder's photos.. and so on.
3. On another note, you have very nice shots. Love the reflection shots, the blurred out one coming down the stairs, etc... personally, feel you left out the couple and people photos. give a go at having more face shots than artsy fartsy shots.
Just a personal thought. Hope you don't take it to heart.
Cheers
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Post by nolifesg on Apr 2, 2008 9:52:28 GMT 8
hey luvin,
Thanks for your kind comments. I do learn a few more things from your comments:)
1) you are right, will take noted of this.
2) "where is the bride?" haha... unfortunately, as a 2nd photographer, im not at the bride side in the morning. So all the shots are of the groom.
3) thanks... will take note of that too.
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